Saturday, December 13, 2008

Dedicated to beloved

Overview :- This poems is written keeping the emotions of a hard working person who tries to build his/her personality to get along with the beloved and put some flavors of faith in hearts

Almost every second is devoted to you
Almost every moment is a dedication to you
I wish if I win and achieve real good stand
then would be glad to get what I deserve from you

Almost every breath is named as you
all my heart-beats works out for you
I wish to stay Loving and caring because
I wanna be the one who stands by you

Of course every day and all the nights
I gonna be more n more loving...
since every blessing i wanna collect for you
and my whole life is meant to love you

I promise to be among the few
to make you feel as a fresh drop of dew
I wish if i get successfull and gentle
I would be glad to get my desires ,thats simply you.

9 comments:

  1. it's really very sensitive poem. It actually increased my heart beat after reading it. Yar you have written your own feelings here.

    Truly Great...

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  2. Thanx andy, well plz keep visiting a lot more to come ,

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  3. yar bhai u touched my heart yar......
    its really a gr8 poem......

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  4. its really a very touchy poem .it makes
    u rem all t gud times.

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  5. bhai its a heart touching poem , realy a great poem

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  6. chal beta javed akhtar ka baap ho gaya hai tu ab do char gaane likh daal phir mein picture banata hoon.

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